Posted By Daniel W. Drezner

In the world of international relations and foreign policy, if you can coin a new phrase or neologism, you've hit the big time.  Think "containment," "clash of civilizations," "end of history," "Washington Consensus," and so forth.  How this happens is some weird alchemy of the term itself, the idea it encapsulates, and the receptivity of the foreign affairs community.  Once it happens, it can't be undone -- and this isn't always a good thing:  Joseph Nye has spent decades trying to rebrand "soft power" as "smart power" to little avail (possibly because someone else popularized the latter term first).  I'm sure whichever Obama administration official said "leading from behind" wishes that Ryan Lizza had never used the quote.  Still, if you suggest a new term of art and it catches on, you've secured speaking engagements for the rest of your days. 

This assumes, however, that your neologism will catch on -- and most of them don't.  This is a good thing, I might add, because most of them are dreadful.  For example, Zalmay Khalilzad has a new essay in The Washington Quarterly entitled, "A Strategy of 'Congagement' toward Pakistan."  If you're wondering what "congagement" means, it's "applying a mixed arsenal of methods to contain Pakistan’s dangerous and destabilizing policies but also to engage Islamabad to sustain existing cooperation and incentivize it to move toward more."  Now, this just sounds awful, which is why it hasn't caught on despite the attempts of Khalilzad and others to incept it into the foreign policy community's collective subconscious. 

I don't mean to pick on Khalilzad -- he's hardly the only offender.  James Rosenau tried to introduce "fragmegration" -- blech.  The term "glocalization" has had a somewhat more successful run, but that's only by comparison to "fragmegration."  For my money, "slacktivism" is the only example of this genre of fusing two words together that sounds even remotely good.  Just as bad were the raft of grand strategy terms that came out in the middle of last decade that attempted to fuse realism and liberalism together:  progressive realism, realistic Wilsonianism, ethical realism, liberal realism, etc.  None of them really took off.* 

In the interest of improving foreign policy writing and reducing the pain one encounters when reading these awful neologisms, there needs to be a flexible freeze on these efforts.  Even if most phrases of this kind are accurate in what they are describing, the neologisms are so painful to the eyes and grating to the ears that they leech away any force that exists in the underlying argument.  

Instead, I hereby offer a humble suggestion:  embrace the metaphor.  The problem with most efforts to brand a term is that they're too literal:  a fusion of two nouns, or an adjective and a noun, to explain a concept.  Metaphors, because they make the intangible more tangible, stick in the brain better.  This is one reason why "leading from behind" worked, as has "the pivot."

The danger of course, is that metaphors don't always perfectly capture the  foreign policy concepts one wants to describe (such as the pivot).  It's a dangerous game -- but so is world politics.  As someone who's had to wade through this crap for well over a decade now, failed metaphors will at least entertain the reader better than God-awful neologisms.  So give the literary device a try, members of the foreign policy community -- and please, for the love of God, stop trying to fuse words together!! 

Full disclosure:  I've haven't really succeeded in this task either, although the only time I think I ever tried was "counterpunching." 

Posted By Daniel W. Drezner

In response to the article du jour about how these Internet-addicted kids today don't read right, Kevin Drum lodges an interesting complaint against today's magazine writing: 
[S]pending a lot of time on the internet, as I have since 2002, has rubbed my nose in something that hadn't really bothered me before then: namely just how overwritten so many books and magazine articles are. Seymour Hersh? He's great. You could also cut every one of his pieces by at least 50% and lose exactly nothing. And I'm not picking on Hersh. At a guess, I'd say that two-thirds of the magazine pieces I read could be sliced by nearly a third or more without losing much. That's true of a lot of books too. So: crisper writing, please! One of the upsides of blogging (and the internet in general) is that it allows information to find its natural length: if something only needs a couple of paragraph, that's what it gets. If it needs 10,000 words, it gets that. But there's no need to pad because "we do long form journalism around here," just as there's no need to slash because you only have space for 40 column inches this week. Worriers take note.
A few brief thoughts.  First, savor the irony here, since Drum's bloggish complaint isn't really be targeted at writers so much as editors.  It's the latter's job to make sure a piece reads crisply and cleanly.  With some magazines, a tension exists since writers are literally paid by the word.  With other magazines, a tension exists because the writer will jealously guard his or her words.  And, finally, with other magazines, editors just screw up from time to time.  Regardless, it's amusing for a blogger to demand better editing of other writers.  Not that Drum's wrong, mind you, but it's just a little strange.  In the interest of fairness, perhaps bloggers could set up their own "editing fund" to help pare down Glenn Greenwald or (retroactively) Stephen Den Beste.  Second, one mild dissent.  In my experience, lengthier essays do not work as well on the web as they do in print.  Maybe, like Kevin, it's because of my upbringing reading books and such, but I find there's a limit to how much text I will scan on one page on a computer screen.  Scrolling down is not as satisfying as turning a page.  I read lengthy online essays the old-fashioned way -- I burn through my toner cartridge and print that sucker.    I'm curious if this is simply a failing of mine or if younger Internet-addicted folk feel the same way. 

Daniel W. Drezner is professor of international politics at the Fletcher School of Law and Diplomacy at Tufts University.

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